I have chosen to submit this poem as an entry for jingle’s Thursday Poet’s rally week 32…Hope u like it!
I’m standing by the graveyard,
It’s half past three,
There’s so many people passing by,
Not one spares a look at me,
I take a step forward, oh what I see!
Covered all over in mud and grime,
Hey! that guy looks just like me!
I was in a spot,
My heart had gone into a tailspin,
What I had before my eyes,
It was so hard believing,
Was I drunk?Now, I must be dreaming,
What’s this eerie, cold feeling,
I just can’t shake it..
Last night,in my car,
I was just doing my thing,
Driving down the highway,
My radio playing Jay Sean,
Just then, I felt the wind on my face,
Broken shards of glass all over the place.
I tried to hold on tight,
Amidst the deepening fright,
The devil in sight,
His smile so downright.
I don’t want to go,
It’s not my time,
I’ve got so much to do,
Like write a song that doesn’t just rhyme!
I’m standing by the graveyard,
No one’s looking at me,
I look at the clock tower,
It’s half past three….
Walk a little closer,
Hey! that guy looks just like me!
Jingle
Nov 09, 2010 @ 22:45:44
lovely word flow.
Thanks for sharing.
xx
Luke Prater
Nov 11, 2010 @ 01:19:20
Enjoyed this one. Thanks for posting it it the PotLuck
Regards
Luke
(mine are here-
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cx
http://wp.me/pTeVg-cP
The Reason You Come
Nov 11, 2010 @ 02:58:51
That’s a scary thing to realize! I hope he comes to grips with the fact of his death one day. 😉
buttercup600
Nov 11, 2010 @ 07:03:11
Wow, that was eerriee to read ….I tried to picture it!! Thanks so much for linking with Potluck, your support means a lot and can’t wait to see your talent shine next week!! Well penned my friend xx
Jamie Dedes
Nov 11, 2010 @ 13:20:00
Wow! That was a wonderful read. I enjoyed it even when I could see what was coming. Well wrought … Nice Rally poem.
Jamie Dedes