Make It Up To You

It’s the end of the road,
And I couldn’t help me thinking,
You were just another girl,
Just another face in my life,
Then why my heart’s so sinking?

The flowers wilt,
And the clouds melt away,
But my pain will last forever,
Baby, I cry for your love everyday.

I’ve been selfish, a total jerk, it’s true,
I’ve let you down, I am sorry,
I was Never the man you deserved all through,
All I ask for is another chance,
Baby, I wanna make it up to you.

I’ve learnt my lesson,
I’m never gonna disappoint you again,
Trust my bleeding heart, my love
I’ll take away the pain,
Please don’t walk away from me,
Don’t leave me weeping in the rain,
Take my hand, let love be the guide,
Baby, I want us to be together again…..

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54 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. trisha
    May 11, 2010 @ 17:26:48

    what a heart touching way of apologising. hope she will understand and make up 🙂

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  2. Anupam
    Jun 10, 2010 @ 22:47:10

    just exactly what I wanted to say to her …!

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  3. dancingfreak
    Sep 12, 2010 @ 05:51:45

    beautiful 😉

    can feel your love , pain and sorrow thro’ your words

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  4. Trisha
    Sep 18, 2010 @ 11:56:59

    rejection in love is the most painful thing in life. i was hoping for part 4 of your story today.

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    • Naba Kumar Barman
      Sep 18, 2010 @ 23:03:15

      Sorry for the delay, friend. A huge power surge left a short circuit at home yesterday. m jst glad that my laptop wasn’t connected. So, no electricity at home now; plus I have nearly finished my laptop batteries. So, a peculiar combination of events.

      But hey, I just can’t help noticing that you are the most frequent visitor to my blog. In fact, you are the only regular visitor! If I had an award for the most encouraging fellow-blogger, it would surely go to you! thank you

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  5. Trisha
    Sep 19, 2010 @ 22:04:09

    The pleasure is entirely mine, i dont visit blogs i dont like. your works are excellent- your poems were fabulous so is the story you are writing.

    you are a very talented writer, hope you wont ignore your talent and will try to further it.

    pray that electricity is fixed.

    thank god that the laptop was not damaged.

    will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

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  6. Olivia
    Oct 12, 2010 @ 18:48:28

    Very cleverly done My Dear- very beautiful.. so connecting!! It seems you have written your mind here– and not imagination alone 😉

    Good work Naba!!

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    • Naba Kumar Barman
      Oct 12, 2010 @ 23:47:07

      Glad you liked it……yes, though this poem is dedicated to a friend, yet I imagined myself in the same situation while writing this one. And look at the turn of events! I am in the same situation exactly six months later! It amuses me sometimes. Sometimes, I just wanna call him up, and say-“hey! I am in the same boat now…..care for a beer?”

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