Love Blues

People, here’s my first blog….the very first of the many to come….well, I was not sure about what to write. Then I decided…lets try our hand at some poetry!! And viola! Here it is! The poem that proves that I really am a crack-head, after all! well, hope that you enjoy it…..be good..drive safe…AND NEVER SLEEP AT THE WHEEL!

Love knows no religion,
It knows no wrong or right,
You just have to pick a girl,
And break a few ribs in the ensuing fight.

With you against the whole world,
Chances are very few,
better keep a helmet by your side,
or learn some Kung-Fu!

And when you are all broken and busted,
who’s gonna pay your hospital bills?
A broken leg, a twisted nose,
20 bottles of syrup, and 2000 pills!

Even with your sorry plight,
You’re quite happy,
that you’ve staked your claim,
your ticket to a beautiful girl,
and unchallenged, undisputed fame.

You step out of hospital,
ready to rule the roost,
but she’s already found a new guy,
leaving you all burned out and bruised!

Well, this nonsense poem,
(you needn’t say it sucks!)
was meant to be a joke,
Turned out to be a disaster,
After all, I am not a cuckoo,
I can only croak!

They say, love’s magical. well, for some, its magical and for some, its mathematical! Mathematical in the sense, that they are left measuring the hole their last date left in their pocket! So here’s my ode to those unfortunate beings who did everything for their only love, but ended up getting the boot instead! Don’t lose heart guys, You are destined for greater things in life…!

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9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Preeti
    Mar 12, 2010 @ 19:44:22

    Hi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,its really a nice poem.Good job. but can i ask u something??????????

    Source of inspiration of this poem…………………………..Do u hv any xperience?????????????

    but i must say u hv a lot of talent in u.don’t underestimate urself.practice this things alwzzzzzzzzzzzz…………………………..Bye.

    Wish u a very very bright future…..

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  2. girimallika
    Mar 12, 2010 @ 19:48:19

    Thats so very true and exotic……ppl alws hv mny alternatives…but no 1 can take no1s place n no1 can frget ne memories of d date who had ditched you….only thing possible is to recover from the impact with sm1 else”s company…….N dn mny a tyms it so happens dt u cant express ur luv 2 sm1even if u luv sm1………..really luv blues!!

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  3. abhishek
    Mar 12, 2010 @ 22:14:28

    very good yaar tune to phod dala hai bahut hi mast
    keeep it up

    Reply

  4. Gargi
    Mar 13, 2010 @ 01:24:50

    marvellous !!!!!!!! spectacular!!!!!!!!!………………………..
    such a genuine n heart-touching theme enveloped by beautifully framed words……………………..
    keep it up…………….
    looking forward to many of such superb stuff, m dying 2 read more……………

    Reply

  5. Sagorika
    Mar 14, 2010 @ 11:18:51

    Hi Naba I am so happy with this step of yours……. the poem was beautifully presented n well said…. I wish u all the best …….. and if I can assist u anyway…….. I am always ready to do so…. Keep going I wish u’ll continue with ur blog ever…………ALL THE BEST .:)

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  6. Preeti
    Mar 17, 2010 @ 09:54:40

    Hi Nav

    Really proud of u bro ๐Ÿ™‚

    I am very lucky, to be the first person to rad this

    great job

    keep it up
    god bless you

    Reply

  7. wordwand
    Mar 17, 2010 @ 17:27:51

    hi , I โ€˜ve got a well deseved award for you , get it in my blog.

    Reply

    • Naba Kumar Barman
      Mar 18, 2010 @ 14:54:19

      To have received an award such as this is a matter of utter joy and honour for me. A zillion thanks to wordwand for deeming me worthy of this award

      Reply

  8. trisha
    Mar 26, 2010 @ 22:21:05

    ๐Ÿ™‚ it happens to everyone-boys and gals ๐Ÿ™‚

    Reply

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